Thursday, May 2, 2019
Wednesday, May 1, 2019
The Present - Describing the boy
The Present - Describing the boy
WALT: Use a text structure appropriate to the purpose
In a dull, dim room, sat a boy playing video games, his eyes were glued to the
screen of the TV. He had pallid peach skin which stood out in the dark shades of
the living room with a puff of blush splattered on his face. Slightly, you could see
a teeny pack of light brown freckles all over his face. His glossy bronze eyes shone
in the dark as he stared into the TV. His zipped up jacket was the colour of lapis
blue. His dark chestnut hair was short and messy due to never leaving the living
room to comb it.
screen of the TV. He had pallid peach skin which stood out in the dark shades of
the living room with a puff of blush splattered on his face. Slightly, you could see
a teeny pack of light brown freckles all over his face. His glossy bronze eyes shone
in the dark as he stared into the TV. His zipped up jacket was the colour of lapis
blue. His dark chestnut hair was short and messy due to never leaving the living
room to comb it.
He lacked sympathy to everybody but video games. The boy was ignorant because
of his negative attitude. His face was stern caused by glancing at the TV screen
for a while. The curtains opened letting the luminous sunlight walk into the room.
The daylight filled the room as he squinted. Obsessed with video games, the boy
was impolite to anyone who tried to get him off the TV. He was attracted to the TV
because of his severe depression.
of his negative attitude. His face was stern caused by glancing at the TV screen
for a while. The curtains opened letting the luminous sunlight walk into the room.
The daylight filled the room as he squinted. Obsessed with video games, the boy
was impolite to anyone who tried to get him off the TV. He was attracted to the TV
because of his severe depression.
By Evie and Dorothy
Thursday, March 21, 2019
Why You Should Be Part Of A Multicultural Group
Why you should be a part of a Multicultural group
Do you think the multicultural group is important (S)? Honestly, I think it is, don't
agree (S)? Well, I’m here to convince you that it is extremely important to us with
telling you all my own opinions and why you should join (C)!
agree (S)? Well, I’m here to convince you that it is extremely important to us with
telling you all my own opinions and why you should join (C)!
Firstly, you should open to other languages and cultures (S). It gives you the
advantage of learning how to live in different ways and to learn other traditions (C).
It’s alright if you don't want to and feel more comfortable with your own language
but I do suggest you look for things you don't usually do like joining the
Multicultural group(C)!Learning more than one language can make you smarter,
wiser and keep your brain, healthy in old age, isn’t that interesting (C) ? I bet
everybody wants their brain to be healthy when they’re old (S)!
advantage of learning how to live in different ways and to learn other traditions (C).
It’s alright if you don't want to and feel more comfortable with your own language
but I do suggest you look for things you don't usually do like joining the
Multicultural group(C)!Learning more than one language can make you smarter,
wiser and keep your brain, healthy in old age, isn’t that interesting (C) ? I bet
everybody wants their brain to be healthy when they’re old (S)!
The importance of joining the multicultural group is to respect them and their
culture, you should appreciate it too (C)! You can gain knowledge and experience
at understanding the tradition (C). No one should be teased or made fun of if
their cultures is different (C). Even if they’re diverse, that’s still not a reason they
should get picked on (C). It’s okay to be different, and if you have any diverse
friends (C). Tell them “I won't judge you because of your culture, I only focus on
your personality” (S). I’m sure that they’ll be extremely happy, they’ll feel like they
have the best friend that doesn’t tease them because of their culture (S)!
culture, you should appreciate it too (C)! You can gain knowledge and experience
at understanding the tradition (C). No one should be teased or made fun of if
their cultures is different (C). Even if they’re diverse, that’s still not a reason they
should get picked on (C). It’s okay to be different, and if you have any diverse
friends (C). Tell them “I won't judge you because of your culture, I only focus on
your personality” (S). I’m sure that they’ll be extremely happy, they’ll feel like they
have the best friend that doesn’t tease them because of their culture (S)!
If you want to join the Multicultural group you can, if your friends don't respect the
culture, that doesn’t mean you should (C)! If they say “ don't join! They’re really
dumb and for nerds!” or “ If you join we won't be friends with you!” (C). They’re
not real friends if they say that, they should let you do whatever you want to do
and if they spread rumours about you that you joined the “dumb” Multicultural
group, and people make fun of you (C). Ignore them (S)! If they pick on you,
you should still be a part of the Multicultural group and respect it (C). It gives
children the understanding of different cultures (S).
culture, that doesn’t mean you should (C)! If they say “ don't join! They’re really
dumb and for nerds!” or “ If you join we won't be friends with you!” (C). They’re
not real friends if they say that, they should let you do whatever you want to do
and if they spread rumours about you that you joined the “dumb” Multicultural
group, and people make fun of you (C). Ignore them (S)! If they pick on you,
you should still be a part of the Multicultural group and respect it (C). It gives
children the understanding of different cultures (S).
Overall, I think children should join a culture group because it's
extraordinarily important for you to respect and to support the Multicultural group
(C). I do hope all these words made you convinced that it’s good to be in a
Multicultural group! These three examples are always going to make you
convinced no matter what!
extraordinarily important for you to respect and to support the Multicultural group
(C). I do hope all these words made you convinced that it’s good to be in a
Multicultural group! These three examples are always going to make you
convinced no matter what!
Thursday, March 7, 2019
Sunday, March 3, 2019
Colour poem - Crimson red
Last week, we created our own colour poems using a range of descriptive language!
WALT-use figurative language in out writing
Crimson reminds me of juicy raspberries in my mouth.
Crimson are beautiful roses planted in the grassy ground.
Crimson sounds like an apple being crunched on.
Crimson makes me feel a bit frustrated but relaxed at the same time.
Crimson tastes like freshly picked strawberries off from the plant.
Crimson smells like baked cherry pie just taken out of the oven.

Thursday, February 21, 2019
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