Wednesday, May 1, 2019

The Present - Describing the boy

The Present - Describing the boy


WALT: Use a text structure appropriate to the purpose


In a dull, dim room, sat a boy playing video games, his eyes were glued to the
screen of the TV. He had pallid peach skin which stood out in the dark shades of
the living room with a puff of blush splattered on his face. Slightly, you could see
a teeny pack of light brown freckles all over his face. His glossy bronze eyes shone
in the dark as he stared into the TV. His zipped up jacket was the colour of lapis
blue. His dark chestnut hair was short and messy due to never leaving the living
room to comb it.


He lacked sympathy to everybody but video games. The boy was ignorant because
of his negative attitude. His face was stern caused by glancing at the TV screen
for a while. The curtains opened letting the luminous sunlight walk into the room.
The daylight filled the room as he squinted. Obsessed with video games, the boy
was impolite to anyone who tried to get him off the TV. He was attracted to the TV
because of his severe depression.

By Evie and Dorothy

1 comment:

  1. The Present-Describing the boy was an amazing interesting read. You and Evie Described his appearance and personality very well I was putting together what he would look like in my head.Overall you used a viratiy of different adjectives and sentence starters. By Dhruvi

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